Song by darkness

He means record a small part of your lyrics so we can see what it sounds like.

hes just a poet

oh...that's too bad.

i wanna see some of his poems

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i thought that was a rap

I just want to point out that epilepsy isn't just caused by flashing lights...

Alcohol, 'that time of the month', stress and sleep deprivation can all trigger an epileptic seizure.

but good words, would be nice to hear them in action though.

I've seen bad lyrics sound great in motion so you should at least try.

^he speaks the truth.

*nods* Yeah I know, but that is the most commonly known one, thanks for the lesson doh, didnt' knwo about the monthly thing >.>

And they can be raps, poems, w/e...

-Death-

It comes so slowly,
it comes for all,
through the night,
down the hall,
in hospitals and even through electricals,
through sweet nights,
to grooms and brides,
to everything in between,
it's like a machine,
it takes and leaves,
it swirls and spins your world,
until it's undefined and gone,
then puts you in a casket,
isn't that some wack shit?

So see your life,
and just accept it,
don't be emo,
and end it quick,
put down that ice pick,
just think about the people in africa,
or the Mid East,
not Side East,
or the Hood streets,
look at the real tough life livers,
and see what they gotta live for,
then think about the people that say your a bore,
and why other's ignore,
them,
and why the pretend,
why they defend,
why they corrupt,
why they disrupt,
ain't they just a buncha cock fucks?

Now you see,
through the eyes of anotha,
who isn't a motha,
or brotha,
just someotha,
life liver,
breath taker,
vile instigator,
but none-the-less,
mind changer...

I like it but I would've taken a different approach to that subject.

How so?

Ok, I gave in, I spoke within, a mic made for some psych, like me,
so take heed, I made this with some embarressment,
so no harrassment,
and don't get bent,
outta shape,
if it doesn't go by the movement you make...

I messed up once... it's a recording of -Something Deep-

Just click Play when you get there...

http://www.jamglue.com/tracks/4877829-Copy-of-Song3

it scared me.....

it needs a beat to it

Darkness wrote:

How so?

Nvm. I kinda see how it is. I think it would be better if it was kinda slow like HHH.

and if he trys not to make his voice like marylin manson no offense but it kinda scares me

I had to be quiet, everyone was asleep

ohhhhh

you should record it to a beat

I have nothing to make a beat with xD

Ican do it!

Then make me a beat I'll do a song to it xD

okay just gotta get mixcraft up again so it may be a few days

darkness do you want to someday be in a record lable?

Ehhhhh, kinda, but not really, Basketball or an Author, that's my main goal atm

are you gonna publish a childrens book if you become a author

Nah, more... adulty, or teen, but definatly mature