Song by darkness

it doesnt matter dude we wont laugh

like it matters i mean look at how lil wayne sounds and he still sells millions

Again doh, nothing to record with

Darkness wrote:

Again doh, nothing to record with

the same here i wanna record something and post it but dont got a device

Well,a ctually, i can record, but it's through a mic on a Team Speak program

Darkness wrote:

Well,a ctually, i can record, but it's through a mic on a Team Speak program

well at least you can record

I'm off to weight lift and run, TTYL

peace

-Something Deep-

I saw you today,
I watched you pray,
to god almighty,
I saw you today,
makin bread to pay,
off a debt your daddy brought to you this day

I saw you today,
walkin along,
singin a song,
I saw you today,
you wrote a ryhme,
better than an M.C.

I wrote about you today,
and here it is,
I titled is Something Deep,
I'd hope to see you this week,
but all I saw was blood in the street

I saw you today,
you were cold and stiff,
it made me pissed,
I cried for you today,
it made my soul drift,
made me rethink shit,

I never saw you again,
but I feel you everyday,
forever with me,
forever with your deity,
I'll pray for you today,
becuase I loved you,
but never knew you

I saw you today,
I looked in the mirror,
and there you were,
within me,
singing,
praying,
writing,
living...

-Bound-
You chain me up like a puppy at the pound,
I see you walk around,
starin' at me like a slab'a'meat,
all the while I just grind my teeth,
but you just think I need ta pee,
my body is tense,
I froth,
you rense,
you think you're royalty,
just like a prince,
take hence,
my pride is my life,
let me free of this binding ties,
let me loose like the flows I swim on,
let me do as I please,
I won't ryhme for you or me,
I'll ryhme just because I'm free!

Take heed these words of a bound dog,
leave now before your found abroad,
don't let anyone or thing hold you down,
otherwise you'll just be another puppy in the pound...



this = me venting... Madre can suck it -_- grrrr...

nice one!

im telling ya darkness is so talented

-Written-

On paper,
so thin,
wrote in,
the blood of sin,
drawn through dirt,
made through word,
usin a stick,
make some sense,
usin' keys to unlock things,
usin' ryhmes to unlock spirit,
let them know and hear it,
you yell it so it'll be jotted down,
then wrote on DownTown corners,
no mourners,
just whores,
holding up signs with something on'em,
saying 5$ bucks,
20$ for a condom,
you see the number one,
then the 5,
then ten,
twenty,
thirty,
fourty,
make more money,
but what is on it,
the green blood that bleaches your eyes,
makin you see nothing but lies,
just so you can hear chu-ching,
while someone named Ming,
dies in Bejing,
so you see,
nothing is as it seems,
that's why it's gotten be written,
becuase words don't lie,
only people do...

you gotta record this shplit!

That first few lines of the last one put Eminem into my mind.

-Vampire-

Blood so smooth,
like silk under a full moon,
oh so soon,
you die for it like crackcocain,
it's so insane,
swirling within you,
for ten times the effect,
it's just one neck,
I'll make a bet,
you can't go one day,
but that's just to say,
you arn't what I am,
the seeker of the night,
with sun as its only spite,
say goodnight,
for my fangs sink in,
and you are within my blight,
feeding and kneading,
being so greedy,
take on look and you'll be kneeling,
you are my victim,
and I am your vampire,
so go ahead and retire,
I'll be soon to consume,
you with my black mire...
I am a Vampire...

-Typical-
I yawn,
I stretch,
I seek my lover,
only to find another,
hell of a reason,
for a hell of a day,
"oh fuck" I say,
as my hand becomes red,
talk about caught red handed,
the cops are poundin on the door,
say no more,
I'm out the backdoor,
this is for sure,
not a typical american day...
"Oh Fuck..." is all I can say...

*throw a rose to darkness*

encore encore!!!!!!

Awww, thanks guys ^.^;;;

*takes le rose and gets back to typin...*


-Black Rose-

You are so beautiful,
yet so painful,
it's neglectful to let you sit,
yet your pin prick,
keeps my hand at bay,
who can say,
that you are ugly,
who can say you're not one of a kind,
who can say they can leave you behind,
but you are mine,
oh so beautiful,
oh so crazy,
your thorns make me dizzy,
so it's not that I'm busy,
or that I'm cheesy,
you are dangerous,
so contagious,
so infecticious,
you're makin me notious,
so stop makin me long for this,
my Black Rose is more than wits,
it's sheer gen-i-ous,
so take a note,
don't mope,
just suck it up,
and give it a grope...

encore encore!!!!!!!!!
again dont let the curtain call

rofl Will keep puttin'em up, but don't waste the talent in one big wail...

ok

if its okay wih yusuf i gotta have you rap wit him!

LOL, jesus, I ain't dat good ^.^; xD

well post a sample if you hange your mind

Sample of what?