Song by darkness

wooo!!!

ohh yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you still raw darkness

-Blind-(Female Point of view, idea by My Friend)

You see all around me,
you see my skin and flesh,
but still I detest,
but still I'm disgusted,
by what you think of me,
your body moves like a shark for the kill,
you expect me to be on the pill,
but still you just see another thrill,
you're blind,
like an eyelessfreak,
you're blind,
like people you kick in the street,
you're blind,

you keep to yourself,
but make all your friends,
you look me over,
till you deadend,
you see the heaven around you,
but make it my hell,
you dissappoint me,
when you fail,
to make me gawk,
at your massive bicept,
and just laugh,
at your lame attempt,
because you see nothing,
you're blind,
you only hear the words,
you're blind,
you can't see for sure,
you're blind,
like the wind,
I blow right by,
your awesome bod,
and brilliant bright eyes,
the ones that only see ass,
the ones that only see breasts,
and still I degress,
to that form that is a whore,
in your mind,
so that's why I say,
you're blind...

still raw!!

nice one!

Written,
crumpled and sent in,
something changin,
makin,
somethign different,
connectin,
gotta be stealin,
doin,
gotta be livin,
without sinnin,
just gotta be in,
the blood of your kin,
creepin,
up your spine it's tinglin,
like my rip adn ryhme,
gotta stay in,
somethin strong and defend,
somethin you love,
and worth dyin,
for something worth cryin,
for somethin for sayin,
you gotta get up,
and stand in,
the crowd you hate,
gotta be down,
with the angst,
you can't keep crumblin,
when you see them cave in,
gotta be a Michael Jordan,
of the room,
and take hold of the rim an,
keep on strivin,
for the world that your divin,
right into,
keep on sayin,
you love the people,
about you,
gotta stop cryin,
about the little things,
and workin on fixin,
the big things,
this is,
for all you haters,
out there,
who wanna,
stop us,
and see that,
we fail at our,
ultimate,
goal...

you're really pumping em out fast now, aintcha?

Wanted tos ee how long I could keepa flow, not very long, nor very good, but now I'm tired, and going to bed like I should...

Darkness wrote:

The world ain't got a reason for none,
but the hype is all just for a gun,
ya gotta keep yaself,
singled out as the one,
who'll stop this tyranny before it's begun,
gotta make ya voice heard when it's a million to none,


You see the color T.V.,
and what's on it,
gotta keep wantin it,
don't start ya ain't gonna stop,
so get up,
get out,
tell'em what it's all about,

Red,
the color I write in,
the color of your dead homies and kin,
it's the color fo the blood leakin all for them,


Blue,
the color of the suits,
of the hoots who think they can,
control us like we the old african,
but we strong now,
we tough,
and I think we've had enough!


Ya can't walk the street without a sign sayin 'support our troops',
but where were you when we went on this weapon raid,
it's all concave,
we all saw the lie,
but no body cared,
they just stared,
all frightened and scared,
but you're not over there,
takin a bullet for a cause that no one knows the reason,
but still,
you try to keep breathin,

My cries,
they are low and unheard,
over the mass media that make you 'word',
and the public appearences,
for public grievencess,
diverting the real reasons,
for the economic depleation,
and they just keep leadin,
usin the red white and blue,
as their big black lie,


These are the thoughts of many,
and the words of some,
but here we are,
to prove we ain't dumb,
so keep your eye on the clock,
because the time will come,
when you see the world,
and all its done,


Ya not gonna cry,
you'll just sit,
keepin your hands ready,
to take a stand,
gotta live up,
and be a man,
just add a W and an O,
and we've got the female power,
then you'll see us,
tower,
and watch us fight the,
power,
and learn to be our own body,
and not cower...

still raw as hell

Darkness wrote:

Written,
crumpled and sent in,
something changin,
makin,
somethign different,
connectin,
gotta be stealin,
doin,
gotta be livin,
without sinnin,
just gotta be in,
the blood of your kin,
creepin,
up your spine it's tinglin,
like my rip adn ryhme,
gotta stay in,
somethin strong and defend,
somethin you love,
and worth dyin,
for something worth cryin,
for somethin for sayin,
you gotta get up,
and stand in,
the crowd you hate,
gotta be down,
with the angst,
you can't keep crumblin,
when you see them cave in,
gotta be a Michael Jordan,
of the room,
and take hold of the rim an,
keep on strivin,
for the world that your divin,
right into,
keep on sayin,
you love the people,
about you,
gotta stop cryin,
about the little things,
and workin on fixin,
the big things,
this is,
for all you haters,
out there,
who wanna,
stop us,
and see that,
we fail at our,
ultimate,
goal...

omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!1still raw

lol double post

My lief is a poet,
gotta let it flow it,
make it drive in,
and dive into the masses,
ya gotta see the end of the lively road,
gotta get stone cold,
and believe in the world's warmth,
gotta forgive and forget,
but not Tibet,
ya homies in the hood,
got it good,
all within one neighborhood,
gotta stop and get it together,
you need a method to your madness,
ya just can't throw down shit,
and expect this,
ya gotta work hard,
gotta move on,
gotta keep on,
live on,
it's not as lame as Tron,
ya break bones and cry forever,
you need to get up and say your better,
crack ya knuckles and get to work,
life isn't just a perk,
it's sometimes some hard jerks,
tanglin your body through rips and dips,
keep ya head straight,
your movin on up in the system,
don't dis them,
it's all about the people in charge,
when it should be you at large,
you don't need a fortune told,
just a future to unfold,
into the bright shining world,
your eyes shall open,
and you'll embrace the heat,
take all in,
and take a beat,
get a boombox from down the street,
get ready,
it's time to become the elite...

not my fave, but thats ok

Darkness wrote:

My lief is a poet,
gotta let it flow it,
make it drive in,
and dive into the masses,
ya gotta see the end of the lively road,
gotta get stone cold,
and believe in the world's warmth,
gotta forgive and forget,
but not Tibet,
ya homies in the hood,
got it good,
all within one neighborhood,
gotta stop and get it together,
you need a method to your madness,
ya just can't throw down shit,
and expect this,
ya gotta work hard,
gotta move on,
gotta keep on,
live on,
it's not as lame as Tron,
ya break bones and cry forever,
you need to get up and say your better,
crack ya knuckles and get to work,
life isn't just a perk,
it's sometimes some hard jerks,
tanglin your body through rips and dips,
keep ya head straight,
your movin on up in the system,
don't dis them,
it's all about the people in charge,
when it should be you at large,
you don't need a fortune told,
just a future to unfold,
into the bright shining world,
your eyes shall open,
and you'll embrace the heat,
take all in,
and take a beat,
get a boombox from down the street,
get ready,
it's time to become the elite...

still motherfucking RAW DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rawk, that word is very offensive to people who... nevermind.

we can curse in this forum hisashi

i know that. it was a joke.

it was?

Kimimaru wrote:

Rawk, that word is very offensive to people who... nevermind.

this? yes.

lol??

Awkward...

marathon gets it lol...

hell yeah!!!

what?