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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:07 pm

He means record a small part of your lyrics so we can see what it sounds like.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 4:51 pm

hes just a poet

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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 4:54 pm

oh...that's too bad.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:51 pm

i wanna see some of his poems
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:11 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:13 pm

i thought that was a rap
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:40 pm

I just want to point out that epilepsy isn't just caused by flashing lights...

Alcohol, 'that time of the month', stress and sleep deprivation can all trigger an epileptic seizure.

but good words, would be nice to hear them in action though.

I've seen bad lyrics sound great in motion so you should at least try.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 10:37 pm

^he speaks the truth.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:28 pm

*nods* Yeah I know, but that is the most commonly known one, thanks for the lesson doh, didnt' knwo about the monthly thing >.>

And they can be raps, poems, w/e...

-Death-

It comes so slowly,
it comes for all,
through the night,
down the hall,
in hospitals and even through electricals,
through sweet nights,
to grooms and brides,
to everything in between,
it's like a machine,
it takes and leaves,
it swirls and spins your world,
until it's undefined and gone,
then puts you in a casket,
isn't that some wack shit?

So see your life,
and just accept it,
don't be emo,
and end it quick,
put down that ice pick,
just think about the people in africa,
or the Mid East,
not Side East,
or the Hood streets,
look at the real tough life livers,
and see what they gotta live for,
then think about the people that say your a bore,
and why other's ignore,
them,
and why the pretend,
why they defend,
why they corrupt,
why they disrupt,
ain't they just a buncha cock fucks?

Now you see,
through the eyes of anotha,
who isn't a motha,
or brotha,
just someotha,
life liver,
breath taker,
vile instigator,
but none-the-less,
mind changer...
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:58 pm

I like it but I would've taken a different approach to that subject.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:00 am

How so?
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:08 am

Ok, I gave in, I spoke within, a mic made for some psych, like me,
so take heed, I made this with some embarressment,
so no harrassment,
and don't get bent,
outta shape,
if it doesn't go by the movement you make...

I messed up once... it's a recording of -Something Deep-

Just click Play when you get there...

http://www.jamglue.com/tracks/4877829-Copy-of-Song3
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:44 am

it scared me.....

it needs a beat to it
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:45 am

Darkness wrote:
How so?

Nvm. I kinda see how it is. I think it would be better if it was kinda slow like HHH.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:14 pm

and if he trys not to make his voice like marylin manson no offense but it kinda scares me
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:16 pm

I had to be quiet, everyone was asleep Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:16 pm

ohhhhh

you should record it to a beat
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:27 pm

I have nothing to make a beat with xD
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:38 pm

Ican do it!
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:16 pm

Then make me a beat Razz I'll do a song to it xD
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:26 pm

okay just gotta get mixcraft up again so it may be a few days
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:58 pm

darkness do you want to someday be in a record lable?
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 4:27 pm

Ehhhhh, kinda, but not really, Basketball or an Author, that's my main goal atm Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 4:56 pm

are you gonna publish a childrens book if you become a author
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:06 pm

Nah, more... adulty, or teen, but definatly mature Smile
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