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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:03 pm

U shouldn't laugh... it encourages me to do drugs.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:19 pm

Ummmm....kay? >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Oct 24, 2008 8:31 pm

Kimimaru wrote:
U shouldn't laugh... it encourages me to do drugs.

Only if you give me some.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Oct 25, 2008 1:32 pm

ya are idiots

smoking idiots Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 06, 2008 9:42 pm

Pink,
the ink,
sink,
in,
the paper,
so thin,
blood rim,
eyes,
see skies,
my ties,
to kin,
so thin,
the bonds,
of,
dna,
some say,
the end of days,
make way,
for the,
end of ways,
clay stay,
in the,
ground,
I found,
this land,
claim,
it for my,
country,
money,
pouring,
right in,
same sin,
drug in,
the body,
bag,
so sad,
yet mad,
so shag,
away,
your anger,
so merger,
integer,
make her,
your love,
so tough,
so rough,
can't get enough,
say snuff,
talk up,
the,
world wide,
conclusion,
there are no,
illusions,
make some,
delusions,
to feed,
the media...
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 06, 2008 9:54 pm

not the best, but its okay.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 06, 2008 10:43 pm

I see the beauty in your might,
star dazzled night,
your eyes they compel,
my body shake and swell,
can you not tell,
I'm dyin to make you see,
what you've done to me,
I cannot seem to breathe,
for eternity!
Why can't you see,
the darkness done to me,
your dark evil spell,
has got me into jail,
I always seem to fail,
and come crawling back for more,
can I not ignore,
this urge for something more!
I die just to score,
my body it sores,
into the skies,
I always see your lies,
but you just deny,
every little tie,
Why can't I breathe,
for eternity!
my lungs they compress,
but all I feel is stress,
Why can't I breathe!
For all eternity....

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Ladies and gentlemen...
I am proud to annouce,
the president of the united states!

Obama for your mama,
McCain for the drama,
enjoy Bush's trauma....

And to the Mr.Bush Jr.... You're fired!

From the white house he goes,
but he thinks he knows,
how this world rolls,
but all he does is shoot,
then says 'oops',
as he deploys the troops,
into hell itself,
give them some help!
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:19 pm

I like that second 1 Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:31 am

LOL XD
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Sat Nov 08, 2008 6:19 am

Darkness wrote:
I see the beauty in your might,
star dazzled night,
your eyes they compel,
my body shake and swell,
can you not tell,
I'm dyin to make you see,
what you've done to me,
I cannot seem to breathe,
for eternity!
Why can't you see,
the darkness done to me,
your dark evil spell,
has got me into jail,
I always seem to fail,
and come crawling back for more,
can I not ignore,
this urge for something more!
I die just to score,
my body it sores,
into the skies,
I always see your lies,
but you just deny,
every little tie,
Why can't I breathe,
for eternity!
my lungs they compress,
but all I feel is stress,
Why can't I breathe!
For all eternity....

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Ladies and gentlemen...
I am proud to annouce,
the president of the united states!

Obama for your mama,
McCain for the drama,
enjoy Bush's trauma....

And to the Mr.Bush Jr.... You're fired!

From the white house he goes,
but he thinks he knows,
how this world rolls,
but all he does is shoot,
then says 'oops',
as he deploys the troops,
into hell itself,
give them some help!
the second one reminds me of the obama ammilli remix Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Mon Nov 10, 2008 10:11 pm

Someone once told me...
A life held back in chains...
is like a life lived in pain...
but a life lived in one world...
is like one lived in agony...

This person told me,
step in another's skin,
and pretend,
to evaluate their situation,
maybe the complication,
will be less like interrogation,
then you can understand,
how we see the sun and sand,
how we breathe,
and how we stand,
and now I say,
demand,
that others not judge you,
demand,
that others not fear you!
Demand!
That others might respect you!
And by hell,
you demand that they cherrish you!
Because I cannot,
see what you feel,
see your ideal,
situation of irony,
say soemthing,
to move me,
compel me,
sell me something real,
not artificial and stolen,
like something that is broken,
speak something not spoken,
here be my token,
of gratitude if you can,
steal my heart and make me undertsand,
why I cry for the man,
who cannot stand,
his knees to weak,
eyes too cold,
his body is crooked and old,
though he just had,
his twenty first birthday,
and why can't he say?
Because his tongue was lost to the hot day,
now you demand respect?
Appreciation,
and Admiration?
Take this notation,
and make an abbreviation,
because my soul can't take,
any fake association,
a life worth living,
is a life lived free,
and a life lived happily...
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:26 am

is this a poem?
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Tue Nov 11, 2008 11:38 am

I like this 1 alot!
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:10 pm

good lyrics
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Tue Nov 11, 2008 7:58 pm

does it pass the Raw test?
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:54 pm

lets see....


the good things
1.awsome lyrics very well thought
2.good vocabulay
3.words used very nice


the bad things
1.doesnt rhyme much
2.over used of the word of DEMAND!
3.it feels like its talking to me...

so ill give it a 3 out of 5

ITS GOOD BUT NOT RAW
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Wed Nov 12, 2008 8:52 pm

It IS talking to you... as a listener...


Note, this is VERY suggestive...it's for my gf >.>

-Shadow-
The shadow,
plays along your skin,
it taps every curve,
every sin,
it moves with you,
delayed only by light,
damn you are just outta sight!
I feel my body begin to sweat,
I only hope you're as wet,
and I can only take a sec,
before I step,
to the rythme of your beat,
and take a seat,
on the lust train,

I never knew,
I could be drawn to you,
coulda been next to you,
bumpin right along side you,
I just never knew,
all the things you do,
coulda had me tied to you,
I think I'm inlove with you,
baby...

The world seems lost,
in the darkest of thoughts,
my eyes they see,
nothing but your lovley being,
I can only percieve,
the hips and curves of your feminimity,
you are so extrordenary,
your eyes they lure my soul,
into a dark silky hole,
keeping my tightly held,
I feel like I'm gonna melt...

I never knew,
I could be drawn to you,
coulda been next to you,
bumpin right along side you,
I just never knew,
all the things you do,
coulda had me tied to you,
I think I'm inlove with you,
baby...

<tbc?>
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:55 am

So nice and beautiful Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 13, 2008 6:53 am

lets see


the good things
1.beutiful lyrics
2.good poem to tell your girlfriend
3.seems like EFFORT
4.this would make her love you even more
and
5.I LIKE IT


the bad things...
1.coulda rhymed a little better
but it wouldnt matter to her cause she loves you and she would be very lovable to you cause you deticated a song to her

for a poem to a girl
ill would give it a 4.5/out of 5
its good
shell like it
and you would get her very sprung hehehe
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 13, 2008 3:54 pm

I flex and she gets... well, ya... I thought sprung was slang for a certain male organ getting long'n'hard, since it's like the term "It sprung from the ground." as in a plant growing from the ground to become stiff and long... like a certain male organ... but w/e
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:19 pm

dude wtf are you thinking hahaha Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:45 pm

that's kinda creepy... but considering I'm listening to Closer By Nine Inch Nails right now, I shouldn't be talking.
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:48 pm

lol hisashis scared
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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 13, 2008 6:16 pm

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Lol you would be too...


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PostSubject: Re: Song by darkness   Thu Nov 13, 2008 6:18 pm

what is your malfunction boy?
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