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PostSubject: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:54 pm

its to the beat of come home
i used a line of come home in it sorry




verse 1
thank you for everything that youve done
you helped me change the person ive becomed
and seing you leave was so much of a ride
i feel so empty without you bymyside
and thinking of all the good times
made it more complicated to say goodbye
there was so many things that i had to say
but i didnt get a chance cause you went away
i would always tell you all of my probles
and you would always manage to solve em
and when i think of you everytime
i feel like im eventually gonna cry

you kept me from falling apart
so this song came from the bottom of my heart
i really want to bring you back
i remember all the fun and sad times we had

chorus
I KNOW YOU KNOW WHO THIS SONG IS DETICATED TO
YOU ALWAYS GOT ME THROUGH
EVERYTIME I NEEDED YOU
YOURE THE BEST FRIEND ILL EVER HAVE
ILL LAST WITH MEMORIES OF THE GOOD TIMES THAT WE HAD

verse 2
my life would have been crazy without you
you helped me like a angel and im glad that i found you
even though you drifted
your still so disted
as time passes by wont forget you existed
wishing at the stars every single night
that well meet again somewhere in life
memories of us hanging out together
i grabbed and kept so there not gone forever
when you went away you werent gone for good
cause i remembered you like you said i would
missing you when realized that youre gone
dripping all the tears from my eyes with this song

you kept me from falling apart
so this song came from the bottom of my heart
just to let you know i havent even changed
cause i listened when you said always stay the same
you kept me from falling apart
so this song came from the bottom of my heart
i really want to bring you back
i remember all the fun and sad times we had

chorus
I KNOW YOU KNOW WHO THIS SONG IS DETICATED TO
YOU ALWAYS GOT ME THROUGH
EVERYTIME I NEEDED YOU
YOURE THE BEST FRIEND ILL EVER HAVE
ILL LAST WITH MEMORIES OF THE GOOD TIMES THAT WE HAD
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:57 pm

nice!
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:58 pm

im raw aint i?


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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:59 pm

...no comment.
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:13 pm

no comment #2 (but good lyrocs Smile)
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:55 am

omg omg omg

i have fans now!!!
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 3:38 pm

uh...I just said I like the lyrics. I'm not a fan until I hear it.
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:26 pm

ohhh Very Happy
ill post another song soon
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:35 pm

you should record it.
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:38 pm

that song is gonna be a song thats gonna be in my mixtape when i release it
i gotta find a studio to record it
i have beats for 9 songs and the lyrics to them
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:39 pm

sick ass! cant wait to hear it!
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:43 pm

its from rap to rap and rock its gonna be mind blowing and ima send that mixtape to record lables to see if i could get signed


its also gonna shock step zero
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:46 pm

hmm. well since you're working on your own, itll probably be done before CR's. I've noticed solo songs comne much faster. I got 2 so far.
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:52 pm

singing or rapping?
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:56 pm

well one is closer to spoken-word Poetry slam and 1 is singing but there isnt very much.
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:56 pm

this song is called one night
yeah yeah uh
brake it down
yeah
break it down


verse 1
see what happens when you mix up your habits
mixing and converting over used tactics
our legacy builds
were heavily skilled
were making it big to get a record deal
gove me a pad and pencil
with instrumentals
to let go off my lyrics to create a raw demo
when it comes 2 music we know we hella sick
my rhymes are so sick ill make your skelleton split
comepound words
in such a typicsal verse
compressing everyword to make your head hurt
try to work with disfunctional beats
if you dont like it add turntable techniques

chorus
WE GOT ONE NIGHT TO MAKE THIS REAL
RAP ROCK EXPRESSES THE WAY WE FEEL
ALL THE FUSED VOCALS WITH EVERY LITTLE SOUND
WOULD WANNA MAKE YOU BANG YOUR HEAD UP AND DOWN

verse 2

i still dont get why you thought we were hopeless
but now your focued
and your eyes are wide open
and you realize im not messing around
i consider myself a new geniouse in town
if you notice im watching my language
dont want my school to ban my cds from campus
making cds is a way to shine
if they dont sell good ill just give it time
if you like our music and you think its good
get ready cause new songs are coming out soon
so take it east sit back and relax
since theres only one more chorus in this track


chorus
WE GOT ONE NIGHT TO MAKE THIS REAL
RAP ROCK EXPRESSES THE WAY WE FEEL
ALL THE FUSED VOCALS WITH EVERY LITTLE SOUND
WOULD WANNA MAKE YOU BANG YOUR HEAD UP AND DOWN


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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:59 pm

kool, but i wouldnt recommend using words like "hella" and "raw"
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:01 pm

holy shit i wrote those words welll those werent the words i ment to write

too lazy to edit it
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:02 pm

I understand. I'm uber lazy.
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:46 pm

U still need the bridge.
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:50 pm

oh yeah. that or a breakdown.
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Fri Oct 24, 2008 7:56 pm

i added a break it down in the beggining

if you rap this to the beat of champagne demo it will sound cool
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Fri Oct 24, 2008 8:28 pm

Lmao at "break it down".
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Sat Oct 25, 2008 1:33 pm

im so creative aint i?
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PostSubject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak   Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:23 pm

uh...wat do you say Kimi? lulz.
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