song by daroker510 aka c rak

**daroker510** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Thu Oct 23, 2008 1:56 am

this song is called one night
yeah yeah uh
brake it down
yeah
break it down

verse 1
see what happens when you mix up your habits
mixing and converting over used tactics
our legacy builds
were heavily skilled
were making it big to get a record deal
gove me a pad and pencil
with instrumentals
to let go off my lyrics to create a raw demo
when it comes 2 music we know we hella sick
my rhymes are so sick ill make your skelleton split
comepound words
in such a typicsal verse
compressing everyword to make your head hurt
try to work with disfunctional beats
if you dont like it add turntable techniques

chorus
WE GOT ONE NIGHT TO MAKE THIS REAL
RAP ROCK EXPRESSES THE WAY WE FEEL
ALL THE FUSED VOCALS WITH EVERY LITTLE SOUND
WOULD WANNA MAKE YOU BANG YOUR HEAD UP AND DOWN

verse 2

i still dont get why you thought we were hopeless
but now your focued
and your eyes are wide open
and you realize im not messing around
i consider myself a new geniouse in town
if you notice im watching my language
dont want my school to ban my cds from campus
making cds is a way to shine
if they dont sell good ill just give it time
if you like our music and you think its good
get ready cause new songs are coming out soon
so take it east sit back and relax
since theres only one more chorus in this track

chorus
WE GOT ONE NIGHT TO MAKE THIS REAL
RAP ROCK EXPRESSES THE WAY WE FEEL
ALL THE FUSED VOCALS WITH EVERY LITTLE SOUND
WOULD WANNA MAKE YOU BANG YOUR HEAD UP AND DOWN

**Hisashi** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Thu Oct 23, 2008 1:59 am

kool, but i wouldnt recommend using words like "hella" and "raw"

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**daroker510** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:01 am

holy shit i wrote those words welll those werent the words i ment to write

too lazy to edit it

**Hisashi** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:02 am

I understand. I'm uber lazy.

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**MarathonMan** · Awesome Member Posts: 1318 Join date: 2008-07-22

U still need the bridge.

**Hisashi** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:50 am

oh yeah. that or a breakdown.

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**daroker510** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:56 am

i added a break it down in the beggining

if you rap this to the beat of champagne demo it will sound cool

**MarathonMan** · Awesome Member Posts: 1318 Join date: 2008-07-22

Lmao at "break it down".

**daroker510** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:33 pm

im so creative aint i?

**MarathonMan** · Awesome Member Posts: 1318 Join date: 2008-07-22

uh...wat do you say Kimi? lulz.

**Hisashi** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Sun Oct 26, 2008 3:48 am

well, just saying break it down and doing a breakdown are 2 different things.

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**MarathonMan** · Awesome Member Posts: 1318 Join date: 2008-07-22

Lulz. You can learn from Kimi. You can learn more from me but Kimi knows some things.

**daroker510** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Sun Oct 26, 2008 5:18 pm

MarathonMan wrote:

Lulz. You can learn from Kimi. You can learn more from me but Kimi knows some things.

i edit it

**MarathonMan** · Awesome Member Posts: 1318 Join date: 2008-07-22

What did you edit?

**daroker510** · Subject: Re: song by daroker510 aka c rak Sun Oct 26, 2008 9:48 pm

i took off the uhs in the beggining and replaced it with yeah