holy shit!!you said shit

Shh.... keep it down!

lol
they could read what you wrote dummie hahaha

Black rock,
skate top,
long drop,
sin,
spin,
lead pen,
make them,
believe in,
the,
political system,
break zen,
take men,
to the front,
lines,
rolling off the tongue,
ryhme'in to the sun,
keep the drum rolling,
strollin,
through a desert,
safe measure,
take leasure,
make a seizure,
speak niether,
language,
of the tribal council,
can't be abountful,
make soundful,
threats,
to the government,
make another tent,
lake southern sent,
break other sense,
lenses giving sight,
make others with might,
british cripes,
say yikes,
like the old mikes,
of court spites,
you're a kite,
in the wind,
lake severe,
amend,
repair,
renew,
say few,
names for damnation,
save self,
for lies and criminalization,
civilization of world domination,
save nation,
the sky is my beat station,
I take elimination,
and make the standardization,
of musical retardation,
the worlds are my turn tables,
like life fables,
I make unsuspecting turns,
using the stars as my equalizers,
like alien upsizers,
I change the voice of mike myers,
make him say,
I wish we would all dyers,
shooting stars are my flows dropping,
you can't keep me from stoppin,
just keep rockin,
to my beats,
the will never cease,
they will never be complete,
so take a seat,
or stand up and drop a line,
but don't waste my time,
I've got spins on my ryhmes,
and all I'll do is destroy your mind...

wow big imagionation

lets see..

the good things
1.big vocab
2.he flowin with tthe flow
3.he said mike myers!!


the bad things
1.sounds like a poem
2.the beggoning was very bad..
3.lines too short

so ill have to give it a 2.5 out of 5
sorry

how's this an immatation?

-Corrupt Me-


I always dream to be,
your dirty fantasy,
will you never see me-
in your wildest of dreams?
I always plead to see,
your eyes be drawn to me,
seeing the lovely-
bride to-be,
can you not see,
you are forever corrupting meeeee?!

Cor-rupt me,
de-cieve me,
ba-ring me downnnnnn,
will you ever bed me,
will you ever touch me,
or will you just fuck me!?

These eyes they beg to be,
free to wonder the,
body that has drawn me,
to your forsaken of thoughts,
I always dreamt of being caught,
rubbing all over my hot,
sweaty, leaky, pot,
but I never saught,
your undesiring eyes,
always meant to stupify,
my heart till it stopped,

Cor-rupt me,
de-cieve me,
ba-ring me downnnnnn,
will you ever bed me,
will you ever touch me,
or will you just fuck me!?

<slow down, keep beat>

Will you;
cor-rupt me?
Will you;
de-cieve me?
Will you;
ba-ring
me
DOWNNNNNNNNNN?!

<angry>
will you ever bed me!?
Will you ever TOUCH me?
Or will you just please,
fuck
me
NOWWWWWW?!?!?!

Come on,
corrupt me now!
And come on,
destroy me now!
Just say,
you'll beat me down!
And I'll,
say fuck me now!
I'll be your dream girl,
I'll be your forever girl,
I'll be your ideal captive,
or your naught cat-nip,
me-ow!
Just ba-ring me down!
Just de-cieve me now!
Just please,
Corrupt me now!

reminds me of Consumed, kind of.

I never knew,
how to make it stop,
how make it drop,
off my table of existance,
make an instance,
seem like a long plain of distance,
I've gotta find a way to change this,
I never knew my way in reality,
it always dropped off into a valley,
seein cliff side Cali,
see the drop of the building into an alley,
but I always knew I could make a salery,
off cheap tickets and stamps,
sellin them to teh real champs,

I always wanted the real life,
never knew the real highlight,
gotta play my cards right,
or I'm gonna be strugglin all night...

I saw a little girl,
playin hop-scotch,
while her pop drinks whiskey,
it's not top-notch,
her world came down,
when the shadow blew fire,
sending her world into a dark spire,
her eyes turned cold,
and her skin grew old,
her life,
with clay yet to mold,

I always wanted the real life,
never knew the real highlight,
gotta play my cards right,
or I'm gonna be strugglin all night...

There was once a boy,
his name was,
but now never is,
he blew a man to little bits,
and saw it as a pain fix,
his world was surrounded,
by words that were pounded,
into his head,
he was always at the ledge,
but now he's over,
seeing the pit ahead,
his soul will be put to death...

I always wanted the real life,
never knew the real highlight,
gotta play my cards right,
or I'm gonna struggle all night,
nothin is ever gonna be alright,
I gotta play when the times right,
here I go,
my soul's gonna explode...

I like the line about the girl playing hop scotch and her dad drinking. Very sad, though.

-Slaves to the Media-

(Today, we will discuss the effects of
a well balanced diet of nuts, bolts,
and oil. We will also discuss the relavence
of your metaphorical blindfold! And fin-ine-ine-ine...)

The media...
it is not your friend...
They see you as pawns,
work till the end of dawn,
see a fawn,
high on a mantel,
can't get mental,
gotta stay simple,
or they'll find ya,
and take ya,
in ya sleep,
for not stayin in your seat,
you broke away from the beat,

We are the slaves,
the slaves to the media!
Gotta stay true,
true to the Sim City-aaaaa!


You watch Oprah,
and buy the next book-a,
gotta stay with the media,
shackle yaself to the couch,
and watch without doubt,
the lies that they put before you,
then stay true,
but not now,
not ever,
we're scared,
but not forever,
gonna sit back in the nether,
we gonna rise and be five times better,


We are the slaves,
the slaves to the media!
Gotta stay true,
true to the Sim City-aaaaa!

Stop watchin,
stop hearin,
start thinkin,
stop seein,
stop believin,
start dreamin,
stop sittin,
stop eatin,
start choosin,
stop doin,
stop obeyin,
start movin!
Get up,
get out!
Scream and shout,
dream up,
inventions,
create something,
worth buyin,
stop lyin,
start speakin,
to the masses,
forget those glasses,
you've got 20/20,
see the money money!

We are slaves to the media!
Gotta stop readin Wikipedia!
Start readin Literotica!
Mass media dramaaaaa!
We are free from the mediaaaa,
gotta step up and be the heroes,
to our own,
society!

I so have to make that!

Edit:
So in the last hour I've been very productive. I made some music for this song and recorded a demo! Yay! This means it will be my first solo song that Isn't a cover! I made many cover songs.

-Thanx-

(*A child's voice plays, saying what they
are thankful for*)

I only knew you,
for the few time or two,
you walk along a plain,
of reality new to the game,
I never knew the real you,
only the name,
and the good times true,
I never wondered what you did,
I never saught to find out when,
Your smile was like christmas day,
taking all my worries away,
but now you're gone...
but now you're gone...

A thanks is less than needed,
I wish I'd never been conceted,
I never thought I say this,
but I'm thankful,
for your existance...

I remember one time we drank,
and you helped tot he kitchen sink,
my eyes never could see it,
but now that I look,
I can believe it,
your heart was as pure as light,
taken everything with a plight,
your soul will also be delight,
even on warm summer's night,
I never knew just generous,
people,
I never thought I'd be able,
to enter rehab with a mission,
you broke away all the tension,
but, now you're gone...
now you're gone...

A thanks is less than needed,
I wish I'd never been conceted,
I never thought I say this,
but I'm thankful,
for your existance...

(*Nother child recoreding plas*)

I never thought I'd know you!
I never thought I'd love you!
But now I'm sad and miss you!
I thank God for every moment,
that we spent together,
But now you're gone and los forever...