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 Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider

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PostSubject: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:08 pm

It is called weak, all written by me Smile



Weak

Listen,
I don not even know you, but you’re disguisting
You’re lonely and not around, all just by shifting
You got nobody to talk to no place to living
When you come back, you are not forgiven
Look what you’ve done to us, we don’t want you to living
You’re so goddamn weak, so weak you’re even not at you mothers funeral
Everything has and end and we just want you to fall.
You blamed everybody and everything, we will not forget it
Don’t even paying bills and stuff, just to fill it
We have a fucking world and you only think about yourself
To damned you’re goddamn life nenergy reduces in half

We don’t like to see what really matters
The thing is you have no heart
The only thing is that the whole family hates you
So by your asshole things you’re just alone

You’re just so lonely
You get no glory
All you just have left
Is asshole persons
Who don’t give a fuck about you
You have to die

For now
I didn’t hear about you in years
I never met you but don’t wanna see your digusting face
You live in America cause you think you’re safe
But the problem is you don’t have faith
Nothing you can do
You don’t have any clue
We know If you come back you’re gonna be arrested and being in jail
It’s your own fucking fault, we know how hard you failed
Life isn’t about getting glory and being rich
Cause you know we don’t have to explain that’s life’s a bitch
So now it’s youre goddamn fault that you’ve no one by you’re side
For you there isn’t a place to hide

We don’t like to see what really matters
The thing is you have no heart
The only thing is that the whole family hates you
So by your asshole things you’re just alone

You’re just so lonely
You get no glory
All you just have left
Is asshole persons
Who don’t give a fuck about you
You have to die

By you’re shitty things
You are so forgotten
Why did you do this to us
You are not forgiven
I can not fucking take it
You’re not here to living

Police must close you up
Youre gonna get raped in jail
You will bleed to dead
You will die alone

Police must close you up
Youre gonna get raped in jail
You must bleed to dead
You will die alone

For what you did to us it hurts us
The meaning you weren’t there, is for you to die alone
You were wrong and you will not be forgiven
If you’re dead you will have a lonely funeral with nobody and nothing
So everybody hates you and you got nothing
It’s your own goddamn fault.

For what you did to us it hurts us
The meaning you weren’t there, is for you to die alone
You were wrong and you will not be forgiven
If you’re dead you will have a lonely funeral with nobody and nothing
So everybody hates you and you got nothing
It’s your own goddamn fault.

You’re just so lonely
You get no glory
All you just have left
Is asshole persons
Who don’t give a fuck about you
You have to die

Die

Die

Die

Dying by loneliness
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Fri Oct 24, 2008 11:21 pm

Interesting... seems a lil off, melody wise, and the words could be changed up a bit, but interesting Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Fri Oct 24, 2008 11:46 pm

i agree with darkness. also, it could use a little less cursing.

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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:54 am

its deep and too much cursing
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:30 am

Well, for a song like this, cursing shouldn't be that big of a part. And also, There's a song called One Weak by the Deftones
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:29 am

It doesn't has that much cursing, does it?
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sat Oct 25, 2008 4:19 pm

18 curse words...
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:32 pm

wow
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:08 pm

D'oh!
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:15 pm

i love it Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:22 pm

would you consider it as a rock song or a rap song?
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:31 pm

hardcore rock

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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:32 pm

it has extremely long verses
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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:33 pm

so

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PostSubject: Re: Song by ColdbutFrozen ft. X-Raider   Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:34 pm

just saying
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